At the Police Station

by duncanr

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11 Comments to “At the Police Station”

  1. Your a jewel Nobbly – a real pendant with them their astrophies.

    However, shouldn’t “policeman” – being a noun – have a capital “P” ?

    . . . and shouldn’t the line “Hello. Is that you Sarge” be followed with a qestion mark and closing quotes ?

    The next line – “Yes ? Go ahead.” should not carry a question mark, as the comment is in the affirmative.

    But, fair effort.

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